Peer Review Questions: Analysis
Paper
Background
According to Thury and Drott, in an analysis paper you explain the
meaning of a source by describing the benchmarks for meaning you
yourself identified while you were reading the source and trying to
figure out its meaning (Chapter 5, pages 4-9).
According to Thury and Drott (Chapter 3, pages 5-6), the
benchmarks for meaning are:
- Subject
- Audience
- Audience Assumptions
- Style of Writing
- Kind of Evidence
- Attitudes/Beliefs/Actions Encouraged
According to Thury and Drott, the analysis of an academic source
is different from the analysis of a journalistic source (Chapter 5,
page 21).
In particular, these benchmarks are most likely to be of interest
in discussing an academic source are:
- Audience Assumptions will be found in the introduction,
review of the literature and methodology sections. The article
will explain:
- what scholars currently know about this area of research
- what work has been done in it so far
- how the current piece of research fits in: it should be new
enough to make a contribution, but it should build on what has
been done thus far.
- Style of Writing. If the article has the standard
academic form
(Introduction-Methodology-Results-Conclusions-Implications), there
may not be much to say about its style of writing. However,
sometimes the authors will present a series of hypotheses or a
group of tests which will structure the main part of the article.
This structure may well be worth discussing, as it is a specific
part of how these authors develop their points, not just a general
description of all academic writing.
- Kind of Evidence will be found in the mostly in the
methodology section. The article will explain the how the study
was designed. Do not describe the methodology for its own sake.
Describe it only if you can use it to show how the study is unique
or important, or to explain the results.
- Attitudes/Beliefs/Actions Encouraged will be found in
the results, conclusions and implications sections. The
discussion there will be related back to the introduction which
explained why the issues involved in the study mattered to
scholars in the field.
Thury and Drott point out that the guidelines for writing an
analysis are about the same as for writing any paper (Chapter 5, p.
8), and that they include being sure you have a focus, and that you
include examples of the points you are trying to make.
What to do
Writer:
- Give copies of your essay to members of your writing group.
- Read the essay aloud to them, as they follow along on their
copies.
Group members:
- As the writer reads, listen for the following.
- the writer's thesis statement
- benchmarks for meaning
- examples of benchmarks
- Underline or circle any relevant sections of the paper.
Discussion:
- Take turns explaining what you identified as the writer's
thesis.
- Does this thesis say something interesting about the source,
or is it only about the benchmarks?
- Are the benchmarks discussed suitable to an analysis of
academic writing?
- Discuss ways in which the writer supported the thesis with
examples of benchmarks
- Did the author gave enough detail from the source so that
someone who hasn't read it can understand the examples given?
- Consider how the writer can improve the paper.
Final points:
As a group, consider:
- The coherence of the paper. What do you take to be its main
statement of its thesis?
- The development of the ideas in the paper. Do subsequent
paragraphs add information to this thesis?